2.1 雅思大作文的评分标准
学习雅思大作文，我们首先要分析一下评分标准。如果我们都不知道剑桥雅思的要求是什么， 自己一味埋着头按照国内英文考试的思维和套路写，就不可能获得好的成绩。
雅思大作文（task 2）的评分标准有四项，分别是：
标准1：Task response（写作任务回应）
标准2：Coherence and cohesion（连贯与链接）
标准3：Lexical resources（词汇丰富程度）
标准4：Grammatical range and accuracy（语法多样性及准确性）
为了方便上课讲解，我一般都将四个评分标准缩写成TR，CC，LR，GRA
剑桥雅思的官网上有不同分数作文的一些特点，我在这里节选了6 分和7 分作文描述的中英文对照，因为这两个分数段是大部分考生的目标分数段。
范文全文
本文大概7—7.5 分。
Many people today frequent fast-food restaurants, because of the fast pace of life and irregular working hours. Fast food has posed a threat to traditional cuisine in many cultures, and people should put emphasis on the problems that may arise from this change.
The fast food has become a health issue in countries like America, where the number of overweight people has increased dramatically. It is not only because fast food is high in fat, sugar, salt and calories but also because fast food is served in large portions. In general, people who suffer from obesity are more likely to contract heart diseases than normal-weight people. As a consequence, this means that governments have to pour more money in the medical system, which may have an adverse effect on the economic development.
Another problem is that it can affect people’s ways of life, including dietary habits.Traditional means of food preparation are known for the diversity of ingredients, cooking styles and flavours, and many traditional dishes show the evolution of cuisine in different regions. Currently, a vast majority of fast food chains provide American or European food, including hamburgers, fried chicken and pizzas. People’s diet is increasingly monotonous, while some traditional recipes may vanish.
Fast food also has an adverse effect on your family relationship, as people do not participate in family meals as frequently as before. As a general rule, family meals provide family members with an opportunity to communicate with each other and improve mutual understanding. People who
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